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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
People grow apart There isn't much to say, Distance grows betwen you........ When you let the love fade away. But if you hold onto it together......... Let forgiveness find a way....... To heal the wounds between you You'll find that love can stay. For when there is love present...... Theres nothing you can't do..... To hold onto each other And last the hardships through. You needn't give up hope now There is a way to proceed If you place your trust in each other...... It surely can succeed. I almost lost a relationship that is very dear to me due to neglect and lack of communication, careless mistakes made like that can really change your life. Force you to see how incredibly short and dear life is......not to mention friends. [This message has been edited by Lisann (02-04-2003 01:38 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ooh, this one takes me back......... Been there, done that, threw away the T-shirt....and made the mistake again, of course..... Well done. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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*Star* Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 32Iowa |
Very nice  and very true, I think we can all relate in some way |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
Thank you for the replies. As far as your comment ratleader......I don't think there is any mistakes.....not when the love is real. No matter what kind of love....romance...parent/child....friend..... all love......if it is real and unconditional....no matter what happens.....it is never a mistake. Lessons learned from it yes.....but no mistakes. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Maybe so..... or maybe it's ALL mistakes, in one way or another......... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
hey lady, been a long time great to read you again, and loved the poem |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...I have a feeling that even love doesn't like neglect...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very lucky for you to have learned these truths without having to lose the friendship and love. Thank you for sharing this upbeat message. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Forgiveness and devition...that's what it's all about |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
Thank you all for your replies......and yes.... I too am very grateful that I did not lose the friendship. it is a relationship that saved my life once....literally....so i am very very fortunate to have it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful, and so true! thank you |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
to grow = to change sometimes the love changes . . . |
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