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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-02-04 10:16 AM


Mister Carroll teach me please
To step through the looking glass
Another world, place of ease
Forget this sordid swirling past

I won’t look at reflections
They just lie to open eyes,
I’ll forgo all emotions
Forget even how to cry.

Your fantasy I will trust,
And play a fine game of chess,
Listen to the wise walrus,
As on the wide beach I rest.

Then my book falls from my hand
And I wake from wonderland.

Gloom


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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-04 10:17 AM


I really like this

Cold hands means a warm heart

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
2 posted 2003-02-04 12:32 PM




Ah yes, Professor, were it that easy. But, nothing like a good daydream to give us relief from the rough spots....

Thanks, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
3 posted 2003-02-04 12:55 PM


Very interesting and clever.

I be me BUT who does me be?

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