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carol
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0 posted 2003-02-04 12:28 PM


Oh my is that the phone ringing i hear
yes it is a lady i have been friends with for twenty three years
I have not seen her since last summer
How lucky i felt it really had me a humming
Since now she lives in Canada my heart was now racing in fear
Oh my heart was really pounding then she said your voice i so wanted to hear
Needless to say her voice was like music to my ear
I asked when will you be back by my way
She answered i will be there sometimes in May
Today i have talked to the two friends i hold so very dear
Now my heart is so over flowing with so much cheer



[This message has been edited by carol (02-04-2003 12:29 AM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-04 12:29 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

GG
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2 posted 2003-02-04 12:31 PM


yay, I'm glad you got to talk to to the friend...
I just had a chance today to speak with a friend I hadn't talked to for a long time.
Friends are such a gift
enjoyed!
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-02-04 12:35 PM


Hey Carol

Tell her Hi for me next time you talk to her.
Okay? Oh, I'll be glad when May gets here, too. We three always have lots of laughs, don't we?  

I like this poem, friend......


Ethel  

carol
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4 posted 2003-02-04 12:40 PM


the-loner-23,Thanks a lot
carol
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5 posted 2003-02-04 12:42 PM


G G , i am so glad i talked to her also i sure do miss her.Yes good friends are a great gift.Glad you got to talk to your friend also

[This message has been edited by carol (02-04-2003 12:44 AM).]

carol
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6 posted 2003-02-04 12:46 PM


I will be sure to tell yes we do have a lot of laughs she said she would be here for a month.I wish she would move back here
passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-02-04 02:59 AM


that's great! You two will have so much fun!
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-02-04 03:28 AM


Enjoyed...James
carol
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9 posted 2003-02-04 11:47 PM


passing shadows, yes i am sure we will enjoyed doing things together
carol
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10 posted 2003-02-04 11:48 PM


James, thanks for the comments
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