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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-03 11:39 PM


Solid Shadows

no black and white
to cover me
shades of grey
is all I see
the solid
shadows of doubt
turns trust to
something inside out


"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


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EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2003-02-03 11:44 PM


It's hard to see through the grey, well done!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-04 03:11 AM



GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
3 posted 2003-02-04 03:22 AM


One time after I had passed out, for maybe twnety seconds (but what seemed hours) I could only see outlines and shades of things. It was all black and white.
But the black outline was a whole lot better than a grey blur
I like this.
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2003-02-04 05:29 AM


It's the unknown of what we see that
   we doubt .... excellent contrast,
      so much said in so little words.

         Well done!

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-02-04 10:16 PM


Beautiful told.
Eric

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