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*Star*
Junior Member

since 2003-02-03

Posts 32
Iowa

0 posted 2003-02-03 10:43 PM

     underneath
     that superficial smile
there is anguish
  a devastated soul
falls
and no one
    cares

down beneath
   the swirling rage
lies a hopeless
  scared    girl
exposed, alone
  with nothing
     crushed by hate
torn by angst

   she cries
with no one
to wipe away
        her
       tears

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-02-03 10:48 PM

(big hugggssssssss) It is so very sad but true, sweet friend, so many children and less fortunate are not gien the compassion and help they need and we must reach out and console these victims to the bitter neglect! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs out to them all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Star, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-02-03 10:53 PM

ouch

this is a painful one,
and I think, the story of too many.
But That its what you're feeling and going through, I'm so sorry, you expressed it well here. Keep writing, it helps.
And welcome to the Blue pages!!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-02-03 11:13 PM

~Welcome to Passions~

Very sad indeed. So unhappy. No idea if you are writing about yourself, but I do know this: I am capable of envisioning the wounded, confused, abused little, tiny girl in me and ~I~ hug her, and ~I~ am the best, most loving parent she's ever had and ~it~ works more often than not. Embracing ourselves so important when dealing with those who are evil or cruel or mean. I ask myself what kind of child I was and I cannot help but love her...hope you can to...
Hugs to you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-02-03 11:14 PM

You'll find as I have star that there are many here who will help wipe them away

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-02-04 12:08 PM

Hello *Star*! Welcome to Passions.
Anytime you want to cry or unload some poetic sorrow, there will be a reader in here. There will also be many who will be greedily awaiting your smiles.

Hope you enjoy the variety.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-02-04 03:05 AM

very expressive write

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-02-04 03:46 AM

Nice expression of your feelings...James

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-02-04 07:14 AM

nice and honest of your feeling at this moment,

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

9 posted 2003-02-04 12:43 PM

Touching write - hope the pain is not yours, if it is PRAYERS.

I be me BUT who does me be?

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

10 posted 2003-02-04 12:45 PM

I relate to your pain Star, sometimes......it really does feel as if there is no one there to care and it is very hard not to give up. Hoping all works out well for you soon.......and you can find a little shining star in your life

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