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cinnamongirl
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0 posted 2003-02-03 09:20 PM


She dances inside her mind alone.
Butterfly grace; delicate
Fragile yet strong as the
Wind in a hurricane.
My baby’s shy whispers
Speak desperate breathy
Sighs of love.
She is as resilient as the
Palm tree;
Fragile and sweet as the
Morning breeze.
She is totally blind to her own
Beauty; it means nothing to her
Just the simple words to
Her song
And she hums her music
To herself
All day long.
She is innocent and as
Pure as the new fallen snow;
But within her, only she knows
The meaning of her world.
She is as strong as
Life Itself;
Fragile, lithe, and gentle
As the Truth that only
She knows.


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GG
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1 posted 2003-02-03 09:48 PM


wow, beautiful.
This made me think of how precious, and sweet life is... especially when you know Truth.
Like this alot.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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2 posted 2003-02-03 10:41 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo precious, sweet friend, it always makes me smile to see little girls and boys embrace their dreams with a smile and believe in themselves with such grace! (big hugggsssssss) This is so gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You and Annika, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annika, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-02-03 10:48 PM


like wow, that was my old aol screenname, amongst many others when i was an online player.........love that grandfather of grunge,
oh by the way, good poem

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4 posted 2003-02-03 10:51 PM


Reading that poem made me feel so at peace and happy, light and airy.
Thank you for sharing something so incredibly beautiful.

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5 posted 2003-02-04 01:50 AM


This is a really beautiful poem.
It has a peaceful and relaxing feel to it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-02-04 02:44 AM


good write, I enjoyed
Ericc
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7 posted 2003-02-04 09:34 AM


Beautiful.
Eric

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