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Alicethruglass
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0 posted 2003-02-03 02:00 PM



Tear Stained Face

This glass
reflects a tear stained face.
No words can take back the hurt,
no arms can subdue the sobs.
This glass is what's real
and its silver backing is wearing thin,
soon to reflect no more.


~A~

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-03 02:24 PM


I loved the vibrant imagry you painted this piece with.
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2 posted 2003-02-03 02:27 PM


ah.. but alice goes through the glass...and the silver backing has no hold on her...


Temptress
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3 posted 2003-02-03 02:37 PM


hello there.

I love reading your work. This one is sad, but the descrition of looking into the mirror...is aweseome.

~~I Love You~~

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-02-03 04:24 PM


Beautiful.
Eric

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-02-03 04:27 PM


I loved this!! Short and so full of meaning!

Susan

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