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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-02-03 01:42 PM

Black Sheep

He's always been the black sheep
and today his color shown.
Divisively he drew the line
and tripped me, laying prone.

I took his word, allowed its find
to enter, scathe my heart.
He's always been the black sheep
and in this way stands apart.

Naive am I to believe his words
and whence they've come to be.
He turned my day into a whorl,
hammering into me.

Upon himself he took the road
to create my feel "alone".
I spent the day reminding self
his color he has shown.

I've blocked him from my life for now
and if the phone shall ring,
if voice of his should reach my ear,
a scolding I shall sing.

Reminding him to stay "his place"
and leave mine for my own.
He's always been the black sheep
and today his color shone.

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-03-2003 01:43 PM).]

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

1 posted 2003-02-03 01:44 PM

He's always been the black sheep
and today his color shone
...
Beautifull...

Hugs, Kelly

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-02-03 04:26 PM

Very powerful.
Eric

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 2003-02-03 04:59 PM

And I thought you were writing a poem about me.....I liked it anyway..

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-02-03 05:39 PM

yes this is a powerful one.

I look at myself right now wearing black pants a maroon sweater and some slick black shoes, I look as if I should be a businesswomen, but I'm heading to a doctor. Its hard to know when that black sheep is there to haunt or is really the most beautiful and unique.
I like this.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-02-03 05:42 PM

nahh, I was writing about my older brother who chose to unload all his jealousies upon me...making me feel as if I had nowhere to turn when I needed to..but it was all lies and

my mother told him off and called me today to straighten it out. Fun having three brothers and a sister. Some days you just want to pretend you are an only child.

M

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-02-03 05:44 PM

Alyssa, my older brother has always had the title "the black sheep" of the family and I have always defended him as I do everyone I care about. But as of today he is on his own...
M

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