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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-02-03 10:56 AM



Muffled Are My Words

why do I do this
why do I torture myself

everyday

just the ringing of silence
inflicted upon me
punishment for the past
of cruelty for the future

words of today
unloaded
penetrating the spare of my heart
burdening my campaign
an albatross around my neck
deadening my feel

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Larry C
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1 posted 2003-02-03 11:36 AM


M,
And the answer is...

I still like that you persist in writing out the process. But you know I always wish for you peace and love.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-02-03 11:38 AM


and I thought I had them both...once

M

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2003-02-03 12:59 PM


then here is to hoping you have them both again....


regards2you
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4 posted 2003-02-03 01:03 PM




~M~

Touching.  You will

Sadly, it never seems in the time span we want it to happen.

Enjoy your writing. Thank you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-02-03 07:11 PM


please get out of this selftorture, you made a good decision
garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-02-04 02:03 AM


Maureen, as always, I love to read your work...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-02-04 02:40 AM


I wonder it sometimes myself
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-02-05 03:21 PM


thank you for reading...this wasn't about my husband or the separation. It was about letting things get to me...

M

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