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Open Poetry #24

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-02-03 08:43 AM

soughing without relief
dazing with the fatigue
depleted of words
and their hollow sound

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2003-02-03 08:56 AM

M,
Spent...sounds like time to recharge them batteries! Personally I would recommend a 10 day cruise. (don't forget the bikini) Oh, and we want details.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-02-03 09:05 AM

Maureen,
Good write and Larry C may be right.

Dr Pepper Freak
Member

since 2003-01-30

Posts 72
CA

3 posted 2003-02-03 10:31 AM

Much said without saying much! Enjoyed

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-02-03 11:02 AM

Larry, do you have a recharger? Mine doesn't seem to help my batteries, anymore.
A cruise sounds nice..but a bikini  ...will have to wait a few more pounds.
M

Sy, Larrys always right. *s



Dr ..I like your signature ...I don't seem to be carrying my load properly lately...would rather drop it off somewhere.
  Thank you and Welcome

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-03-2003 11:03 AM).]

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