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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-03 08:17 AM


        
        
           I dream your
           Touch -
           Soft
           Along
         A finger's path.

     I wake... my outline traced in gold.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-02-03 08:19 AM


Ericc
Nice dream.

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2 posted 2003-02-03 08:37 AM


yes..nice... short and evocative.


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3 posted 2003-02-03 08:46 AM



What a lovely image!

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4 posted 2003-02-03 08:58 AM




(sigh) Oh Eric, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as I know this special caress feeling and long to feel it someday! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-03-2003 08:59 AM).]

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5 posted 2003-02-03 09:16 AM



How very beautiful!!

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6 posted 2003-02-03 09:57 AM





Eric,

What a treat! Love your poetry.
This is special...

Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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7 posted 2003-02-03 10:15 AM


This was absolutely beautiful....

BlueEyes

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