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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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If If I fantasize my write Paint the cold of snow warm white Make the icicle seem a gem Like a rose upon a stem If phantoms enter in your mind And make you think that I’m quite blind Do not judge me in the real It’s not, my true thoughts appeal. I would you have a pleasant sea A sail upon a fantasy A wonder into wanderlust And take my hand in simple trust. Fly a carpet through your way Be Aladdin for a day Spend a moment’s childish wealth Twill do wonders for your health. So let your breath blow dragon steam And own yourself a goodly dream. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Spend a moment’s childish wealth Twill do wonders for your health. easily forgotten by many of us I think... thanks for the reminder Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat, My pleasure. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes... I'm off to daydream for a bit... Thank you for the suggestion, Sweet Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan OK I'll be right there. LOL  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would you have a pleasant sea A sail upon a fantasy A wonder into wanderlust And take my hand in simple trust. ~*~ Yes, Sy, I would will you all of that, and more... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Sy..time to let the child within out for the day.. Do you think perhaps Randy could pick me up for a ride? Tea's on!  ~Morning Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And in the realm of art, "if" never exists, "if" becomes the comparison to the ordinary world with "either" and we flow gracefully in this special world you create! (sigh) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Fly a carpet through your way Be Aladdin for a day Spend a moment’s childish wealth Twill do wonders for your health. So let your breath blow dragon steam And own yourself a goodly dream.' All aboard for Disneyland!! Whimsical write for a suddenly sunny day!!! Thanks Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I'll take you there and back. Nancy, After tea, I'll double saddle Randy and we'll flee. Noah, Just saddle up your dragon and he'll take you. Dunc, You made my day. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Awonderful thought to help me through a Monday, Sy.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio I'll send you a bottle there are thirty in each one for every day. LOL |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautiful thoughts Seymour magical carpet ride To fantascies I would willingly glide Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS Every one has a dragon, just saddle him up and he'll fire up. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, I love this one. It is so caring and loving and uplifting. Enjoyed greatly! Your poetry does all of that and more. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Am I too late?!! Am I too late?!! Oh, dear, with such wonderful words, I want to come along with everyone. Seymour...wait for me please! Loved this. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Always enjoy your comments. Chris , I would never leave you behind. |
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Dr Pepper Freak Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 72CA |
*starts singing...'I can show you the world, shining, shimmering, splendid'...* Very much enjoyed this! It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
by the touch of your hand...I'm taken to Tinkerland.   *ww* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr Pepper, Glad you enjoyed, thank you. JM, I'll see you in Tinkerland. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--a magical poem that put a smile in me. Thank you...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie But that's what I like to do, put a smile in you. |
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