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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-03 03:01 AM


Fini                        /Good

Even love                Salang do
will wither                juk nen da
and die                    nan yak
if not given               juji aneumen
the proper                if sa neun
nourishment.            juk nen da.


JamesLee
February02
2003
In English
In Korean

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (02-03-2003 03:04 AM).]

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2 posted 2003-02-03 01:02 PM


Wow, a love language lesson!
hello James

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3 posted 2003-02-03 02:42 PM


You said it..and I LOVE the way you said it.

Big truth in few words. You do that so well.

~~I Love You~~

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4 posted 2003-02-03 02:56 PM


Oh James!  Now I just LOVE this!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2003-02-03 02:57 PM


James, this is very pretty.
I love it, too...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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6 posted 2003-02-03 11:27 PM




(smiles) Oh James, I too love to write bi-lingually, sweet friend, I love Spanish and am developing my knowledge of the language quickly! (sigh) Marvelous job, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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