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carol
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0 posted 2003-02-02 11:30 PM


All the time on the road we rush to ride.
Like we are trying to roll along with the tide.
And at the end of a very long hot day.
I think of all the things i didn't take the time to say.
So sister this i want to make real clear.
To my heart you are so very dear.
I know at times the waves seams to be a lot rougher.
But remember that is what makes us so much tougher.
And we so often think of our troubles.
Not realizing thats what made our love grow double.
I want you to know no one could ever take your place.
It always makes me happy to see your smiling face.
So since i don't always take the time to say.
I am always thinking of you every day.
So dear sister i thought i would write this line.
To let you know you are special and i love you all the time.


© Copyright 2003 Rita C Burkett - All Rights Reserved
christian
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1 posted 2003-02-02 11:34 PM



youre shaggy poem made me want a dog,

this poem made me want a sister.

damn you. :smirk:

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2 posted 2003-02-02 11:37 PM


Carol, I'm sure that your sister loves this poem. It's a very good way to tell her that you love her.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-02-03 01:06 AM


very special indeed! nice write
carol
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4 posted 2003-02-03 01:47 PM


christian, yes sisters are awful good to have.
carol
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5 posted 2003-02-03 01:48 PM


passing shadows, thank you, i sure do love my sister
carol
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6 posted 2003-02-03 01:50 PM


Ethel, yea i am sure my sister will like this.
SPIRIT
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7 posted 2003-02-03 10:17 PM


I just posted one with the same title in the Corner Pub - how lucky we are to have Super Sisters. Very nicely said.

I be me BUT who does me be?

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8 posted 2003-02-03 10:46 PM




(smiles) Oh Rita, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your sister loves you so uch and I am sure thinks of you all the time too as you are her sister too! (sigh) God Bless You Both, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

*Star*
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9 posted 2003-02-03 10:55 PM


Anybody would be a very lucky person to have a sister like you
carol
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10 posted 2003-02-03 11:19 PM


Spirit, yes we are lucky to have lovely sisters i will have to go to there and read yours.
carol
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11 posted 2003-02-03 11:21 PM


Noah, thanks yes i know she loves me too we have shared so much
carol
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12 posted 2003-02-03 11:25 PM


Star, i feel like i am the lucky one  i am 2 years older but she been by my side a lot.
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