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carol
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0 posted 2003-02-02 08:57 PM



Some folks tells me he is not human.
And it always sends me away a fuming.
He has so much black and white hair.
He looks like a little fuzzy bear.
My little shaggy is so very smart.
He puts so much love in my heart.
Shaggy shows you he has so much joy to share.
His little eyes says don't you also want to care.
My little shaggy when we are far apart.
I still love you so very deep in my heart.
Although i know with your eyes you can not see.
I know you can feel my love for you will always be.

[This message has been edited by carol (02-02-2003 09:11 PM).]

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-02-02 09:05 PM


Hello, friend  
It's good to see you on here.
I like your poem about little Shaggy.
He's a sweet little dog.
I didn't understand how attached a person could
get to a little dog, until I got my Scooter.
Now I know. lol

                   

Ethel  

SPIRIT
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2 posted 2003-02-02 09:10 PM


My heart belongs to my funny little border terrier Scruffy so can relate to this neat piece.

I be me BUT who does me be?

carol
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3 posted 2003-02-02 09:16 PM


garysgirl, i know you thought i didn't know what shaggy was telling me now you are as bad as i am. wait untill you have had him 12 years.

carol
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4 posted 2003-02-02 09:18 PM


spirit, i love your little dogs name my granddaughter had a dog named that.
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5 posted 2003-02-02 09:21 PM



I  know
I never knew I would be like I am about
Scooter.......and, I'm getting worse. HaHa!!

Talk to you later..

Ethel  

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-02-02 10:51 PM


carol - the poem you wrote about Shaggy is just darling. Shaggy must be a dear...

BC

christian
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7 posted 2003-02-02 11:32 PM



damn. you make me want to have a dog.

i need one, these college misfits cause
to much trouble as company. :smirk:

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8 posted 2003-02-03 01:06 AM


cute
carol
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9 posted 2003-02-03 01:40 PM


Bill, yes my shaggy is sure a dear. i don,t know what i would do without him
carol
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10 posted 2003-02-03 01:42 PM


Christian, wish you had a dog also they are so loving.
carol
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11 posted 2003-02-03 01:44 PM


passing shadows,thanks i sure love all of my pets
vlraynes
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12 posted 2003-02-04 01:14 AM



Carol~
A lovely tribute to Shaggy.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

poohbear19
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13 posted 2003-02-04 08:10 PM


good poem.
carol
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14 posted 2003-02-04 11:22 PM


viraynes, Thanks, I sure do love my shaggy, I have other pets too but i have had him the longest.also he is blind so he really depends on me

[This message has been edited by carol (02-04-2003 11:22 PM).]

carol
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15 posted 2003-02-04 11:23 PM


poohbear19,I am glad you liked it

[This message has been edited by carol (02-04-2003 11:24 PM).]

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16 posted 2003-02-04 11:56 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Carol, this is soooooooooo cute, I love puppies and kittys and I can't wait to be able to see pictures of Shaggy in the near future! (kiss on cheek) This is adorable, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carol, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
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17 posted 2003-02-05 12:05 PM


Noah, i am glad you like this.I have got to write a poem one day about my buddy which is a brother to Ethel's scooter

[This message has been edited by carol (02-05-2003 12:06 AM).]

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2003-02-05 03:48 AM


Nice name for a dog...James
Dr Pepper Freak
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19 posted 2003-02-05 07:21 AM


Very touching tribute!  Enjoyed it!

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

carol
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20 posted 2003-02-06 10:26 PM


James michael,Glad you glad liked my poem Thanks
carol
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21 posted 2003-02-06 10:28 PM


Dr Pepper Freak, Thanks glad you enjoyed it
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