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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Dream concept a film director's paradise the nicest house on the block and will have the memories to match a sprawled estate shawdowed in a low roofed unassuming neighbouthood between wire mesh gates and pewter markers gypsies too can live in mansions complete with horsedrawn chariots vine trellises make the view difficult but distinction knows no social class tuscan or ionic? real or symbolic? taste for adornments, even or crass the nicest neoclassical columed front will have memories to match the finest granite home on the block wait a minute there are none just homes constucted one like another dream concept, no back to reality and the shanty towns of multitudes [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-02-2003 04:19 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
gypsies too can live in mansions complete with horsedrawn chariots ********************************* now you've pictured one of my fantasies |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly detailed and desriptive! Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Martin! Fantastic images here! Enjoyed the read. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
everyone has the right to live as they wish..it's just the 'means' of many that gets to me. ..and I could be referriung to any walk of life..thanks Midnite [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-03-2003 12:30 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Eric, Nancy Now I don't know about the fantastic images or exceptional descriptiveness..seems quite average to me...the message is so much more important. Thanks for sharing though  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-02-2003 04:22 PM).] |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ecrivan, I enjoy reading your poetry. I may have to read it twice, sometimes, to get the full meaning of what I think you want the reader to get. I will admit, that I have to read your replies, too. You are a very good writer and I like the subjects you write about. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
the poems are packed with interest, I know...much like my paintings which strangely enough are created to look at again and again...the talent runs in my blood Ethyl, if I could be so bold as to say this just once  |
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