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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-01 06:32 PM


And a sigh sweeps
past the open window
of my soul-
A glimpse of life
forever
fleeting
swept past to stormy
sea's
unknown,

And you and I
have always been
a moment shared upon
the edge of time,

For I have loved you
A thousand
liftimes -
Each one a blessing
I adore.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-02-01 06:34 PM


Oh so exquisite and beautiful!
This is one huge *sigh*...thank you for this.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

regards2you
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2 posted 2003-02-01 06:41 PM




Eric,

This is perfect. I must save it.
No one has ever said it better or as beautifully....


Pat

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        "Desiderata"

abbe
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3 posted 2003-02-01 06:51 PM


totally perfect...

nuff said

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-01 06:57 PM




(sigh) Oh Eric, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love this feeling and know this truly to my heart! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-02-01 07:03 PM


Ericc, when you've been here longer you will know that I'm
one of the "hopeless" romantics here and I LOVE  poetry
like this. This is definitely a



Thank you.

Ethel...garysgirl

ecrivan
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my own state
6 posted 2003-02-01 11:34 PM


am not much of a 'romantic' poet, but I can appreciate the element...you'll see a variety
of poems here, welcome and enjoy your stay


the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
7 posted 2003-02-01 11:35 PM


Very beautiful poetry here

Cold hands means a warm heart

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2003-02-01 11:52 PM


very nice mr. romance...helen
Neeraja
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9 posted 2003-02-02 07:03 AM


Oh... what a beautiful poem...

I enjoyed it a lot...

Love can be so beautiful...

Neeraja

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10 posted 2003-02-02 07:22 AM


   ...you and I
have always been
a moment shared upon
the edge of time, ...

~*~

For someone who thinks the edge
holds much...this, Sir, is a

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