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A Star Fell Today
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A Star Fell Today |
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Thisman Junior Member
since 2003-01-21
Posts 19 |
a star fell today from radiant skies sublime but it's gleaming majesty summoned heavenward not wishes but prayers a star fell today but eyes which rose to behold it's radiant path glistened not with wonder but with tears a star fell today and left a hollow in the cold bright firmament which is the exact shape of the hollow in my heart [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-01-2003 07:19 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
... Thank you for this. ~Hugs~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well written, a wonderful tribute and quite "heart" touching. Hugs, Pat  |
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Thisman Junior Member
since 2003-01-21
Posts 19 |
Forgot to proof-read; Line eight should read: "To behold it's radiant path" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm still at a loss for words, but admire those who can bring them forth... Thank you. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Touching tribute. Well done. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, a star did fall and now God has seven new angels who will always watch over their families! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed welcome to passions |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well done. My heart aches. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes, my friend, I think this is an outstanding tribute to those we lost today. Many of us share that same hole in our hearts...thank you for this. A truly happy person is one who |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you for writing this. I can't seem to find the words to express my heart, but you did it very well. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
'to behold its radiant path' many hearts skipped a beat following that path |
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Barbara Trautman Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 90 |
Speechless by how words come forth at a time like this. I'm happy that others are expressing what I can still only feel. Thank you. Barb |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisMan~ And THIS is extremely well written~ Oh my ... you touch the reader~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ruskins Junior Member
since 2008-11-27
Posts 15 |
superb. |
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