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A Star Fell Today

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Thisman
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0 posted 02-01-2003 06:29 PM       View Profile for Thisman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Thisman

a star fell today
from radiant skies sublime
but it's gleaming majesty
summoned heavenward not wishes
but prayers

a star fell today
but eyes which rose  
to behold it's radiant path
glistened not with wonder
but with tears

a star fell today
and left a hollow
in the cold bright firmament
which is the exact shape
of the hollow in my heart


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-01-2003 07:19 PM).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 02-01-2003 06:32 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

...

Thank you for this.
~Hugs~
regards2you
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2 posted 02-01-2003 06:35 PM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you



Well written, a wonderful tribute and quite "heart" touching.


Hugs, Pat

Thisman
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3 posted 02-01-2003 06:37 PM       View Profile for Thisman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Thisman

Forgot to proof-read; Line eight should read:

"To behold it's radiant path"
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


4 posted 02-01-2003 07:20 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


I'm still at a loss for words,
but admire those who can bring
them forth...

Thank you.
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 02-01-2003 08:00 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Touching tribute. Well done. ThisDiamond
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 02-01-2003 08:13 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, a star did fall and now God has seven new angels who will always watch over their families! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 02-01-2003 08:18 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

enjoyed welcome to passions
Nightshade
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just out of reach


8 posted 02-01-2003 08:47 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Well done. My heart aches. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Sunnyone
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9 posted 02-01-2003 08:57 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Yes, my friend, I think this is an outstanding tribute to those we lost today. Many of us share that same hole in our hearts...thank you for this.

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

the_loner_23
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10 posted 02-01-2003 11:28 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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11 posted 02-02-2003 12:10 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Thank you for writing this. I can't seem to find the words to express my heart, but you did it very well.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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12 posted 02-02-2003 03:22 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

'to behold its radiant path'

many hearts skipped a beat following that path  
Barbara Trautman
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13 posted 02-02-2003 03:29 PM       View Profile for Barbara Trautman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Barbara Trautman

Speechless by how words come forth at a time like this.  I'm happy that others are expressing what I can still only feel.  Thank you.  Barb
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14 posted 02-03-2003 01:55 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

awesome
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 10-25-2003 09:43 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

ThisMan~
And THIS is extremely well written~
Oh my ... you touch the reader~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

ruskins
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16 posted 11-27-2008 12:43 AM       View Profile for ruskins   Email ruskins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ruskins

superb.
 
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