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dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26
Posts 267
Missouri,USA

0 posted 2003-02-01 05:02 PM



Warm Summer Breeze

The warm summer breeze
blows gently through his hair
he stares out at the seas
in silence and aware
of his mortality
seems reality
has shown him...alone


Watches a couple walk
hand and hand across the beach
dreams of future he hears them talk
knows of oneness they'll strive...to reach


Together they seem in total bliss
love occupies their very being
the voyeur in him stares as they kiss
envelopes their passion he is seeing
old fashioned
loves passion
without care he watches them there...alone


In tune to the waves crashing
they dance to the oceans song
to him she's beautiful to her he's dashing
to both each other they belong


And now, after reminiscing in his mind
reality snaps him from the past to find
the warm summer breeze
blowing gently through his hair
as he stares out at the seas
in silence and aware
of his mortality,
seems reality,
has shown him through past remembrance... alone


Copyright © - 2001 Dennis Hicks
    

*Just a quick note about this write.
There was no one else on the beach,
as this was all in his mind as he looked out
towards the ocean...indeed ...alone














  















  

© Copyright 2003 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-02-01 05:18 PM


Dennis,
The images of the beach in solitary splendor are stunning. I like the circular nature of the poem as well.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
2 posted 2003-02-06 12:16 PM


Stunning indeed and I agree, I loved the style of this poem
Nice write
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-02-06 03:05 AM


I have done that too...
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