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jade dragoness
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0 posted 2003-02-01 09:36 AM




hold on tight tonight

we are gaining altitude

selfless thoughts prevail

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regards2you
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1 posted 2003-02-01 09:40 AM




I love this. It made me smile!
A hundred thoughts rushed pass as I finished last line.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-02-01 09:46 AM


jade  
Good one, enjoyed.

jade dragoness
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3 posted 2003-02-01 09:53 AM


thank you Pat and Randy
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