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Petal Pushers |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Turning to toil in my secret gardens climbing roses unfold that I've so carefully pruned. A scent of blush fills the air from a fresh sprinkling climbing over an arbor leaves a mist in the morning. Clinging vines on a trellis where tender buds bloom hinting at spring petal pushers that swoom. As they dapple and dance in the shadows of sunlight renewing the spring and the beauty I love. That slips in so slowly to lie in my arms a bouquet to behold long stemming from you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like you're in heaven there |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
spring, roses, love in the air, sounds real nice just about now, lovely poetry |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Silly me I had you pictured in these just below the knees small hem slit pair of pants working in the garden. Well, never mind. It was almost as romantic as your poem!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (02-01-2003 09:34 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lori, "As they dapple and dance in the shadows of sunlight renewing the spring" How pretty is that! Like the image and the sentiment of this poem. Frangrance of this garden:lovely! Re-reading is a pleasure. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade A delight to read.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...being a petal pusher myself, I loved this a bouquet full!  |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
this is a great poem. my daughter has the green thumb in our family, but i love what she accomplishes... and on this winter's day i am really ready to see some spring flowers. made me feel it was here for just a moment. thanks |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
makes me want to plant a garden and then sing a dance WITH the flowers thatnks for helping me take some time to smell the roses. I like this Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, once again you have painted a beautiful picture with words. I love roses, too...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Dr Pepper Freak Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 72CA |
How beautiful and such a delight to read. Can not wait to read more soon! It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You guys are the best, thank you so much for stopping long enough to smell the roses. I anticipate the spring with open arms, as my garden is begging to bloom again. I just hope my petal pushers will still fit! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
May every day bring fresh flowers, and sunshine. TD. Loved this title as well. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful Blues, a reminder of rebirth and of cycles |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love roses and flowers so much and this is filled with such heavenly smiles! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
"long stemming from you," what a perfect line and a perfect image. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
TD~ In a perfect world, I wish! Thanks. Raph~ I started to use the word rebirth when writing this. It's nice to know it didn't get lost in the message. I appreciate you reading. Noah~ If I can bring a smile to your face then I have succeeded. Thank you kindly~ Kethry~ What a nice surprise to see you here. I'm so happy you enjoyed that line...when you stop to think about it that's where it all starts. Thank you so much for reading. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-01-2003 07:23 PM).] |
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