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Larry C
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0 posted 2003-02-01 01:23 AM



Late Night Blue Page Behavior
By Larry Chadwick



Too tired to post their thoughts,
This hour of night they just want to read.
So they sit and stare at the board
Waiting for somebody to finally post.

A standoff at the old blue walls,
I’ll not hit my key to post
You hit yours first
I just want to read.

So there they sit
All thirty facing their screens,
Nothing happening at all,
They’re all too tired to post!

Refresh again the count is the same,
Refresh once more a stand off it is.
Refresh, refresh no one will concede,
They're all too tired to post, why not go to bed.
January 31, 2003



If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.



[This message has been edited by Larry C (02-01-2003 08:59 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-01 01:27 AM


Not tired over here in Australia Larry, its only 5 pm.
Well thought out poem, i like it alot

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2 posted 2003-02-01 01:30 AM


Yes, Larry...why not???HeeHee.....

                 

Ethel

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3 posted 2003-02-01 03:06 AM


Now just how did you know that??  Hmmmm?  

I know it's not polite to stare,
I was just pretending to use my time wisely.

Say goodnight Gracy, goodnight John boy!


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4 posted 2003-02-01 03:30 AM


come on now...this is the time that I just get going...but sometimes too sad to get it on the page, I guess...
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5 posted 2003-02-01 07:56 AM


...Geesh - I missed it... I was sleeping the whole time...

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6 posted 2003-02-01 08:09 AM


LOL, I've hung around here at night enough I've seen that scene, been one of those blue gazers.
But now that I'm awake, go fix that typo in line one. If YOU are awake, you'll find it.
morning hugs to you

Larry C
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7 posted 2003-02-01 09:51 AM


Sun,
Hey,I love having all the Aussies on this board! Welcome to Passions. Hope you love it here even half as much as I do. And thanks.

Ethel,
Careful, anything you say can be used against you in a court of law! And thanks for being here.

Lori,
Well good morning Gracey dear!

Dixie,
It's not an indictment. And thanks for being there.

Nan,
And I should have been...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Larry C
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8 posted 2003-02-01 09:52 AM


Kacy,
You know I thought I saw that last night but was toooooooooooo drugged to care. But thanks for the help.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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9 posted 2003-02-01 10:26 AM




Larry,

A great way to play catch-up on reading so many wonderful poems.

And, yes....sometimes too tired to form the words for a reply to a poem that would remotely do it justice...

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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