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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-31 09:32 PM


Just To Love Me

could you
love me
just as
I am
the beauty
the plain
and to
wade through
the thick
and thin
of me
just to
love me
for who
I am


"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2003-01-31 09:51 PM


Wow!
Could the answer be anything other than...yes?
Beautiful.
Eric

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-01 03:29 AM


always
Larry C
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3 posted 2003-02-01 09:17 AM


Now helen, you know I would...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-02-01 09:31 AM


1slick_lady
That is what we all ask, enjoyed.

GG
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5 posted 2003-02-01 11:46 AM


good question in a world of so much plastic love ..pretending to be real but suffocating all around.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Dr Pepper Freak
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6 posted 2003-02-01 01:27 PM


The words I think we all secretly feel yet tend to be afraid to convey for fear of the answer no.  I can feel the emotion you put into this and its beautiful, cant wait to read more!

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2003-02-01 04:02 PM


helen - soft tender words...

BC

Kethry
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8 posted 2003-02-01 05:49 PM


through thick and thin
the smart and plain
I would win
your love again.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-02-01 06:13 PM




(sigh) Oh Helen, this is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you for who you are and I hope yourn love can always see that in you too! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

bslicker
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10 posted 2003-02-04 09:54 AM


YES
YES
YES


Bernie

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11 posted 2003-02-04 02:21 PM


I don't know you.......but yes....I can.  Another great write dear.
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