Angst of a Psychotic Passifist

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Open Poetry #24

Angst of a Psychotic Passifist

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-01-31 12:44 PM

Incarnate bizzare eternities
dance like demonic sugarplum faries
reality's edge blurred
to extinction

The roses I gave you
now wilted
and faded
jaded I throw the vase
against your picture
on the wall

Wishing it was really
your face I was hitting
blood staining
perfect make up

When does hate start
and love end
or is it merely one flame burning
into another

The muses stroke my mind
provoking me
to twisted textual incantation
of shakespearan proportions

I realize I am awake
but wish I was dreaming
for who can live forever
in this alternate reality
of eternal ansgst

So I pity myself
wallow in misery
and that was before
breakfast
which of course is cold.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-01-31 12:47 PM

gritty and real expression of the angst..as well as the anger... ending with again being served off a cold platter even the sustanence of life..

dark write... but loved the exploration and the honesty of it.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-01-31 12:53 PM

Oh how I love your stuff...I am your sister of the dark write. I literally have to force myself to write hopefully.

Susan C.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-01-31 12:56 PM

thank you!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-01-31 01:01 PM

Interesting....I replied to yours at the same time you were replying to mine. Thank you as well.

Susan

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-01-31 01:05 PM

your welcome

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-01-31 01:08 PM

dang...

Darksoul
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 61

7 posted 2003-01-31 02:50 PM

Very cool in a strange sort of way

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