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Ada'doLisdo'ti
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0 posted 2003-01-31 12:26 PM


Going away, me and a few close friends.
Waiting for word, hope the means jutifies ends.
Going away, at the order of a pin signature.
Hoping when the orders signed their sure.

Here we go perpared for war.
Here we go to settle some score.
Here we go off to war.

Going to sit in some foriegn land.
Build positions, watch the sand.
Squared of like football teams, oppisite.
Whose right or wrong we'll soon forget.

Going away, me and a few close friends.
Waiting for word, hope the means jutifies ends.
Going away, at the order of a pin signature.
Hoping when the orders signed they're sure.

[This message has been edited by Ada'doLisdo'ti (01-31-2003 12:33 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-01-31 12:30 PM


Ada'doLisdo'ti
I hope so too.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-01-31 12:35 PM


A..L.. ~

It really hits home when one reads the words of someone in the military who is waiting for the order to "go". My prayers and thoughts are with you all...

Blessings,
Earth Angel

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-31 01:20 PM


it hurts to sit back and watch it, and not be able to do anything
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