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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-01-31 08:23 AM


“IN THE MOONLIGHT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Last night I took a ride on the moon,
went from here to there, everywhere,
I even rode a moonbeam down to you,
you were in the meadow sitting there…

Looked into your eyes, mysterious in ways,
in ways of expression about how you see,
gentle, soft, as you gaze throughout,
I felt them when they touched upon me…

No words could I say, none were there,
just beauty seen sitting in the moonlight,
there is only one thing I could ask of you,
bring me within you, into this special night…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2003-01-31 08:27 AM




Bill,


"just beauty seen sitting in the moonlight".....

I like that picture....

This is soft and sweet and wistful.

Enjoyed, Pat  



..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (01-31-2003 08:29 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-01-31 08:38 AM


Bill,
With this write I think there is a good chance. Enjoyed.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-01-31 08:47 AM


You paint a beautifully romantic picture m'friend.
Much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2003-01-31 08:49 AM


Bill, you always make me smile.

Your sweet and gentle spirit shines softly with that moon that guides you to these romantic fields...

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-01-31 08:53 AM


Bill, this was pure magic!--moving and mystically marvelous! ---so incredibly romantic....I do believe I enjoyed this! tehe

Warm hugs,
Linda

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6 posted 2003-01-31 09:06 AM




(sigh) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, you always make the moonlight shine in your words and I wish for love to writes its signature in cursive across the moon! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Nan
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7 posted 2003-01-31 09:50 AM


Lovely night indeed... Moonlight is soooo seductive, isn't it??.. Nice one, BCI...
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8 posted 2003-01-31 10:05 AM


Bill, this is so sweet. I like to read about the moonbeams that bring you to your love. Such beautiful thoughts....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-01-31 01:36 PM


I wonder how you continue to see the world this way...me I was blind to all this years ago
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