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Sun of faith
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0 posted 2003-01-31 07:09 AM



The sun hits the trees
Shadows form below
Life seems endless
But there’s still more to know
The world is so great
We all must embrace it
Loose all fear in side
Free yourself to that destination
The distance is so beautiful
Desired from my heart
The lights beacon me
Calling my name
All is waiting for me
Asking the question
When shall I arrive?
Soon I pray
As tomorrow is too late!


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Nan
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1 posted 2003-01-31 07:33 AM


All we have is today... Indeed - Welcome to Passions, Sun of Faith - You'll enjoy yourself here.  I look forward to reading your work...
Sun of faith
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2 posted 2003-01-31 07:38 AM


Thank you very much, i look foward to reading everyones beatiful work also, this is a great place.
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3 posted 2003-01-31 12:36 PM


Delightful use of imagery in this one!
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4 posted 2003-01-31 01:03 PM




(sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, embrace the sun and walk to it as it is waiting for you to follow! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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5 posted 2003-01-31 01:06 PM


very well said! I love it!
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2003-02-01 01:05 PM


Asking the question
When shall I arrive?
Soon I pray

Love how you embraced the written words.

nice~

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