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Sun of faith
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0 posted 2003-01-31 06:51 AM


My inner self is there
As my body remains here
I must find a way
To get to my salvation
It’s not enough for me to dream
I need that dream to become reality
For I could never live a life
Without me being there
The natural beauty you have
You’re past to recognize
And the future we will share
In my heart, will always be there
See you soon
My land of dreams


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-01-31 06:57 AM



Being cognizant of where your dreams take you is a beautiful feeling.  Welcome to Passions, Sun [sister], and please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-01-31 09:20 AM




(smiles) Just awlays believe in your dreams, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous debut, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-01-31 09:22 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post.
I shall have a look at your other work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

regards2you
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4 posted 2003-01-31 09:42 AM




~Welcome to Passions~

Ah, another dreamer; you'll fit right in here. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Enjoyed. Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-01-31 09:59 AM


Welcome! Welcome! Welcome! What a fine debut you have made at your new home away from home! You are among kindred spirits who love to write and read poetry.

I believe I understand where you are coming from with this poem--and you have conveyed it very well!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-01-31 01:45 PM


nice write! Welcome to Passions!
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just out of reach
7 posted 2003-01-31 01:56 PM


Welcome To Passions!! Enjoyed your first post. Have fun here. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Charisma
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8 posted 2003-02-01 11:14 AM


Welcome to passions

Charisma

Barbara Trautman
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9 posted 2003-02-01 11:20 AM


I'm new and nervous, too.  But I want to welcome you as well.  A lovely poem.  Do write more!  Barb
garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-02-01 11:48 AM




WELCOME  TO  PASSIONS  IN  POETRY
.
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I enjoyed your first post and hope to read more of your work.
I hope you like it here amongst this "family of friends" at PIP.
               
.

Ethel.....garysgirl

Dr Pepper Freak
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11 posted 2003-02-01 01:30 PM


Welcoem from one newbie to another =)  Hope to read more from you soon!

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

Sandpiper
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land of flora and fauna
12 posted 2003-02-02 08:43 AM


Enjoyed----Welcome!!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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