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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-31 06:41 AM


Consider

could you
consider my
delicate strength
to dissolve
your fears
of uncertainty

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


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1 posted 2003-01-31 06:59 AM


short and sweet, this made me really think, love it!!!
Nan
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2 posted 2003-01-31 07:48 AM


If only more would see it your way...
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3 posted 2003-01-31 07:51 AM


love the "delicate strength"

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Lost in thought
4 posted 2003-01-31 10:05 AM


I love the 'delicate sctrength' too
makes me ponder it more ..someone who's firm, and knows what they need their strength for.

and my bus should come in about sixty seconds! cya!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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Georgia
5 posted 2003-01-31 12:34 PM


Delicate strength is much powerfult then the mightest of brute force. Very well written
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displaced
6 posted 2003-01-31 01:22 PM


yes
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