Spartanburg, South Carolina
This is clever, Wes. Very very clever. I enjoyed it. My suggestion, though, is to try and make the lines make a *little* more sense. They are just the tinest bit too random. Don't change them much, the randomness is a vital element in the construction and message of the piece, but try to make them make some kind of grammatical sense.
Line 6, I'd suggest the following:
First off, change "TIMING" to "TIME".
"i can't remember, I forgot this TIME"
Line 7, I'd insert a comma after "things".
Also, in the last line, it is "life is too random..." not "life is to random..."
Aside from that, I really enjoyed it.