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Martie
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0 posted 2003-01-30 07:21 PM






Forever February

All along the edge of night
she silent slips with ancient ways
with toss of head sends mauve to dark
this art work is the sky and more
belabor not the trust she has
that turn of hand can bring sun down

Come February now the time of mourn
she stops to ponder not warn or wasted
from so much night and day
how display the color of the way it feels
to leave beloved flying over hills to stay
forever along the mist that tears have made

She knows this space from every year
has come to feel the callus it has wept
and contemplate the ways to pull the paint
to make a backdrop compliment the grief
and some relief the beauty caught define
like sweet memory of sun in shine of hair

The time is near now she can feel the strain
though it remains eclipsed the brightness fades
then opens new a page of month of days
so turning now she sets the sun in clay to bend
forever February into love again




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1 posted 2003-01-30 07:28 PM


forever
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2 posted 2003-01-30 07:35 PM


Oh, sweet Martie - pulling at my heartstrings once again. Precious little angel face.        hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-01-30 07:35 PM




Martie,?

Many, many warm hugs to you...so heart touching to say anything is almost to tarnish the perfection and beauty.

Love and strength to you, Pat  



..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (01-30-2003 07:36 PM).]

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Never ever forgotten....your Michelle.

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5 posted 2003-01-30 07:54 PM


beautiful
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quote:
...so turning now she sets the sun in clay to bend
forever February into love again...

Michelle wrapped this with a bow,
and then kissed your cheek...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-30-2003 08:00 PM).]

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7 posted 2003-01-30 08:13 PM


Martie~ My words could never express what my heart feels while reading this beautifully sad poem. Just know that your words have touched my heart greatly.
Be careful if it is time to take that trip to your special place...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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8 posted 2003-01-30 09:38 PM


Just lovely, Martie - There's nothing else that can be said...
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9 posted 2003-01-30 10:14 PM


*tears* and forever (((HUGS)))
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10 posted 2003-01-30 10:32 PM


All along the edge of night
she silent slips with ancient ways
with toss of head sends mauve to dark
this art work is the sky and more
belabor not the trust she has
that turn of hand can bring sun down

=========================================
She knows this space from every year
has come to feel the callus it has wept
and contemplate the ways to pull the paint
to make a backdrop compliment the grief
and some relief the beauty caught define
like sweet memory of sun in shine of hair

The time is near now she can feel the strain
though it remains eclipsed the brightness fades
then opens new a page of month of days
so turning now she sets the sun in clay to bend
forever February into love again

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You will already know what the title of this means to me...
I dont think there will ever be a time I can look at that pic and not get emotional...so many times I have felt her in your words...and also felt your healing and your cherish of the time you had.
The traces left behind become treasures and turn poetry into versed legacies of love.
I truly lack the words to tell you the beauty of this poem and the way it made feel...but then you already know...words arent needed.
Love you Martie-girl.

If made to choose between the power of writing a poem
or the ecstasy of a poem unwritten I would choose ecstasy
In the end it is better poetry
KG

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11 posted 2003-01-30 10:42 PM


Martie - how special are the poems that you share Michelle with all of us.  A little girl never to be forgotten and and wonderful woman who shares the memories and love with us.  This is a lovely poem - Paul
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12 posted 2003-01-30 11:03 PM


Martie sweet Martie,
Oh how you tug at my heart strings. You don't know but my daughter was born in February. The 19th will be my first birthday without her.

I have no idea what it means to lose one so young. But my heart aches at the thought. Yes indeed it is forever February...and I will always say...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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13 posted 2003-01-30 11:57 PM


Martie, these are beautiful memories.

--Elizabeth

Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping.

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14 posted 2003-01-31 12:34 PM


I almost made it. Almost made it all the way through.....you know the rest.


Ye move me, lass.

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15 posted 2003-01-31 12:49 PM


Oh Martie, sweetie,
I didn't make it all the way through. This touched my heart very deeply. This picture is so beautiful of both of you. I just don't know what else to say. She's a little Angel now, watching over her Mother.......

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16 posted 2003-01-31 04:39 AM


I still remember what you said MLP, about had she grown into the life she deserved...

my thoughts are with you through this difficult difficult month...

love you lots

K

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17 posted 2003-01-31 09:15 AM




(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Martie, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, I'm so sorry again for your loss as she deserved so much more, but know that know she is always watching over you, so lucky to forever have a loving mom, you, in her heart! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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18 posted 2003-01-31 09:23 AM


Martie,
A special month, a special day, in fact February is my birthday. Beautiful

Martie
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19 posted 2003-01-31 11:19 AM


Thank you for these heart felt replies.  February is a special month for me...packed with memories punch, but also its joy.  I look forward to it as much as I dread it.  Thank you for supporting me each year as I write of her.  
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20 posted 2003-01-31 11:57 AM



youre fetish with february brings out
your poetic abilities :smirk:

come february, and .. now this?
damn, youre killing me here!

-chris.

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21 posted 2003-01-31 12:01 PM


Chris--And it's not even February yet...I'm sure there will be more, not because I want to kill you, but because I want to save myself.  
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22 posted 2003-01-31 12:09 PM


Grief will be replaced with soft memories as each new day begins...I have you in my prayers..

believe in what your heart feels...

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23 posted 2003-01-31 01:25 PM


I couldn't read this again if I had to...for my eyes could not handle the flood
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24 posted 2003-01-31 04:01 PM


it thats a lot to leave me at a lost for words but reading these words I don't know what to say... except that this is both powerful and beautiful.
All along the edge of night
she silent slips with ancient ways
with toss of head sends mauve to dark
this art work is the sky and more
belabor not the trust she has
that turn of hand can bring sun down

got hips like cinderella must be having a good shame talking sweet about nothing
cookie i think you're tame" The Pixies


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25 posted 2003-01-31 06:34 PM


And in my heart you will always be
for what you are is also me
never lost, never gone
as the wind brings me your love's song

And in the memories, no one leaves...very gentle smile

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26 posted 2003-01-31 06:45 PM


Martie, I get the most awfullest feeling reading this.  Best wishes to you.
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27 posted 2003-02-01 07:43 AM


Soft, gentle...a quiet kind of beautiful....

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
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