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paladin
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0 posted 2003-01-30 02:24 PM


Seeds of images
Thought provoking little gems
Minimalist poems

paladin

....a knight without armor

© Copyright 2003 Robert E. Jackson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-30 02:28 PM


Very nicely done. You have mastered the minimal, I would say
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2 posted 2003-01-30 02:32 PM




    Fun to read jewels
  wisdom beyond poets years
    diamonds of words
                                  Chris

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3 posted 2003-01-30 02:41 PM


Very nicely done Robert..
In the style you have perfected!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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4 posted 2003-01-30 02:42 PM


yes... I like this..
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5 posted 2003-01-30 09:26 PM


i know how much you love these kind of poems... good spreading of the word
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6 posted 2003-01-30 09:41 PM


Exactly!!!

Warm angel hugs,
EA

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7 posted 2003-01-31 04:19 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love little seedling poems too, though I usually love to write long song ballads! (big huggsssssss) You have both the roots and wings in your soul, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Between the Lines
8 posted 2003-01-31 05:06 PM


His eyes say it all
Penetrating pools of blue
The touch of small talk

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9 posted 2003-01-31 05:59 PM


like this alot very sweet

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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