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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2003-01-30 01:36 PM



i blame myself if you're not feeling well
i feel like slapping myself
to make you feel better
true, I want to be your lover-
but not your significant other

most likely, I'll have to settle
for roses to bring you to me
during a good night's sleep
where in a wonderful dream,
we will be the happiest couple making love

but, right here; now, I can't wait...
O your thighs, I'm kissing
close to me, I pull you
Woman, O Woman, O Woman, O Woman...
your wonderworld,
the dreams that drive you,
your sympathy, your love;
your anticipation
...all these...
I am kissing, licking, holding,
praising; enjoying...
this very moment

O dear roses, please understand...

       ****   ****   ****

..circa 2002..Copyright 2002/2003 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites

© Copyright 2003 Spiros Zafiris - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-01-30 01:57 PM


Spiros,
I'll be back to read the other answers. LOL

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-01-30 02:01 PM


laughed out loud at seymour the voyeur!

This?

"Woman, O Woman, O Woman, O Woman..."

so simple and yet so eloquent...truly speaks of that drowning encompassing passion.


Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada
3 posted 2003-01-30 10:30 PM


.Seymour Tabin../\.. + serenity blaze../\..

..thank you, both, for reading my poem; i
appreciate your taking the time to comment..

../\..Spiros


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