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Henri Bardo Junior Member
since 2002-10-15
Posts 11State of suspended inanimate |
The crater punched Moon invades a bruise colored sky Mean light mid-block a lean and darkened alley Cavalries of clouds had quelled a solar skirmish, shortened by winter yet bloodied at it's end Cirrus remnants, dregs, picked over the abandon field, mere whisps looting fresh sprung stars, sacrifices to camp followers of Mars smothering souls at their outset The battered Moon alone shone heroic Sole sentinel of light, Pendent pug persist |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to Passions,.....please check your mail for a special greeting! Charisma |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lots of nice imagery here, Henri - Welcome to Passions - It's a wonderful place... 
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Henri, Welcome, for a first post it wheels a ghost, enjoyed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
welcome... nice imagery in this....and I am looking forward to reading more from you |
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Tari Miriel Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 69The state of mind |
I like these little morsels. It's flash photography, capturing something as big as the imagination with no boundaries. Tari  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Imagery, inner rhyme in time, some alliteration... yep! A Poem! Welcome to Passions! Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Very nicely penned opening post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Henri "The battered Moon alone shone heroic" Very much enjoyed your fresh imagery. Welcome to Passions. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post!! Chris |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
The impact of your words drive your imagery with great force.Welcome to passions. paladin |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The crater punched Moon invades a bruise colored sky ====================== very cool surreal image... the whole poem is wonderfully painted with the stars of your words. Something very familiar about your writing..will have to watch for more. Weclome to Poetry Land Poet Bardo...so nice to meet you. jm If made to choose between the power of writing a poem |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Such beautiful images in this piece, and it is so nice to welcome you to Passions and I look forward to more of your work. |
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Henri Bardo Junior Member
since 2002-10-15
Posts 11State of suspended inanimate |
Merci! Such a warm reception is appreciated. I'll try not to bore you. Thank you for the card Charisma. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Henri, this is a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, this is gorgeous as Lady Luna indeed is the sentinel of love, to glow and nurture our children with her blanket of light as they sleep, I LOVE IT! Welcome to Passions, sweet Henri, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Henri, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome! enjoyed the pug persist fling more starlight this way, please |
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