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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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my limbs are aching for him every nerve alive with curiosity brimming over the edge of my emotion leaving behind nothing but the ton of doubt I have feeling nothing but lack of patience I know when I awoke I wanted him I want him today and tomorrow when I wait I think when I feel I hate the stars fell on my head wishing too hard wanting too much all at the same time forever is how I get through wondering every moment and repetitive feeling in my head what shall I do with us what shall I say to the lonely thought how do I appease my only way of thinking the only thing I have is now my anxiety living in the here and now not fleeting until tomorrow for a breif moment I hate waiting I hate bleeding I want to leave but still it pulls me near the fake imagery of my fantasies are calling me they are saying to hang on another day is this real or my selfish brain tricking me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what ache! nicely expressed! Welcome to Passions! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So much longing and so nicely written. Welcome to Passions. please check your email for a special greeting. Maree  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry, Black Swan...  |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Welcome...enjoyed!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~Welcome to Passions~ You captured much when we don't know the outcome, and the real vs. fantasy. Description of obsessing very well written. Enjoyed. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Karilea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Black Swan Strong write, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) You describe this ache and yearning ever so well in this fabulously crafted debut, sweet friend, this is marvelous, I LOVE IT!!! I send many angel hugs of comfort to you! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by all your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Swan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-05-2003 10:43 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome Black Swan! "is this real or my selfish brain tricking me" This reminded me of a very old TV commercial, "Is it real or is it Memorex?" In this case, is it real or fantasy? Good Q. |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
thankyou!! everybody for such a wonderful welcome.i really feel at home here. ~Talia |
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