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Goodknight
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0 posted 2003-01-30 10:18 AM


Grey overcame the sky
The earth was replenished
With tears from the sky
Colors are hushed
As the clouds chase the sun
But playing in the rain
Can be oh so much fun

© Copyright 2003 Paul Tofte - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-30 10:29 AM


Paul--It has been a long time since it has rained here....I think I would go out and jump around in it if the sky opened.  A delightful poem!  
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2 posted 2003-01-30 10:36 AM


Delightful read!
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3 posted 2003-01-30 11:20 AM




"colors are hushed"....like that line as well as this  short, fun poem.

Yes, it is such fun to play in the rain. Enjoyed this. Made me smile.

Pat

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4 posted 2003-01-30 12:37 PM




(smiles) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, I love the rain so much and I don't care if my long hair gets all messy, I just love to skip out in it! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2003-01-30 12:54 PM


Hi Paul!
Much enjoyed the read..and I love the rain as well.
Did I mention I'm glad you're posting again?
~Hugs & Smiles~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2003-01-30 12:58 PM


Yes. Depends on the point of view.

sweet read, Paul.

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7 posted 2003-01-30 02:16 PM


Thanks everyone for your responses - Paul
Brad Majors
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8 posted 2003-01-31 02:36 PM


Very nicely done!
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