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Open Poetry #24

Sweet Song Silenced

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-30 08:03 AM

Sweet Song Silenced

there was
a song
that sang
through the night
the clearest
of tone
notes that
took flight
sadness took
the music
it flew
like a bird
its voice
is now still
no more
to be heard

good bye sweet song
sweet song good night

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-01-30 08:09 AM

ohhh

I need some music for the long nights...
And I'm not much of one for change.
made me sigh but very enjoyed

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-01-30 09:46 AM

this beats the neighbors playing music so loud you can't sleep..

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-01-30 10:34 AM

I wonder is this of a song or a metaphor for something beautiful that was lost anyway very well done!

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