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Enotneicna
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Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 2003-01-29 11:43 PM


Lines of Time
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He watched thru the lines of time
As if searching or waiting for something
A figure crossed his vision
Such graceful elegance
.
The lines of time folded and blended
She stopped, cocked her head; listening
When she turned her eyes grew wide
Not with fear but recognition
.
“I could feel you in the folds of time
Watching and waiting
At times rreaching into my mind
With images and music to touch my soul”
.
“We are kindred spirits, you and I
Set adrift within these folds of time
I have heard the musings within your heart
And caught the scent of your desires”
.
"If only I could traverse the lines of time as you do
There is so much I wish to see
If only you could teach me
I would be forever in your debt"
.
Enotneicna
SLR
1-26-03

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!


[This message has been edited by Enotneicna (01-30-2003 02:08 AM).]

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2003-01-29 11:58 PM


I like your poem E wish to see yuh more often hell you have been around longer than most of us at this site
WhiteRose
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2 posted 2003-01-30 12:29 PM


Very nice, Enjoyed the read
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-01-30 02:09 AM


well done
Enotneicna
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4 posted 2003-01-30 02:13 AM


wayoutwalt......thanks.......this is the first i've written in awhile.

Many blessings
Eno


WhiteRose........thank you much.

Many blessings
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



Enotneicna
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Oakland, Or, USA
5 posted 2003-01-31 02:53 AM


pasing shadows.........thank you.

Many Blessings
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



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