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Velvet Fawn
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Velvet Fawn |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Curious, I sweep across your silent edges The weigh of then to now from hand and heart Check and measure every contour, mold and pledges Simplified in honey accolade, wild rose and fell apart Cautiously, I settle in your lap and wave unbroken The slip of satin taken from the top and bottom sleek In the rhythm ridden high and rise a sweet forever token Transcending to explorer and explored in prints unique In pant of legs and limbs entwined and warm…so warm The kind of whine escaped in throaty exclamations So shadowed the recline to dine and drink of silent storm And mime, locked lips sail ships to sure exhilarations And candidly a sight to see and frolic peak to tide The smooth to soothe beneath my hands and face the dawn Traveled lightly over easy all the curves of sunny side Said into your eyes without a doubt so fond in velvet fawn Copyright Kkh 1/29/03 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Geeez woman, you're getting better all the time. Love the frolic peak to tide and all the curves of sunnyside. Just beautiful you! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh, my goodness! This is not simply one of your beautiful romantic poems, this is sizzling hot! Enjoyed the intensity and creativity! Great! Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Tari Miriel Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 69The state of mind |
This is a stunning poem chock full of expressive phrases~ Tari |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 good stuff! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is so lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as fawns are so innocent and cute and knowing such a love can give you sheeps eyes! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Very interesting... the image I first received from the beginning two lines lead me to believe that this would be a beautiful dance of hands for an interpreter to the deaf; however, by the ending stanzas, even the speaker of hands is silenced by awe... a lovely picture, indeed... |
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