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Wobbly Head Bob
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0 posted 2003-01-29 03:56 PM



I walk alone
To test my fate
With constant thoughts
Of why
This comes all too late

These things of mine
Laid on my track
All remind me
That I
Can’t just give them back

Through all this time
My thoughts appeal
I could not help
Myself
And its too much to reveal

So here I am
Just for today
My folded hands
Out for
A second chance to pray

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-01-29 05:42 PM


hmmmm...reconciliation didn't work for me...wonder if it ever does.

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2 posted 2003-01-30 02:58 AM


self analyzation is good...so is praying. hindsight is always 20/20

good write, got me thinking

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-01-30 04:11 AM


enjoyed...James
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Georgia
4 posted 2003-01-31 12:39 PM


Its been awhile since I've seen you work. Good piece here!
Cerenity
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5 posted 2003-02-01 10:59 AM


Hi Bob,

There is some wisdom found in this piece of poetry, I am going to save it I need the reminder, thank you for sharing.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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Gaia
6 posted 2003-02-02 03:13 PM


No, you really can't go back again. Reconciliation never seemed to be a viable option for me.
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