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dhicks03
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0 posted 2003-01-29 01:04 AM




There are no explanations
Trepidation's of lost souls
Leave not, a forwarding address


Should one somehow some way
Live to see a different day
When all that doesn't matter
Lies undying in a simple moment
Then there I hope and pray
You will find me


Never to be confused my love
I shall not want, to be unwanted
And the dreams held so close
Shall never go undaunted
By the flame of yesterdays candle


The wind will still blow I know
While grass will continue to grow green
And future moons shall sing their tunes the same
The only difference my love
Is I, will not be there...to listen


© 2002 Dennis Hicks

© Copyright 2003 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-01-29 03:08 AM


oh

oh my God! this is awesome!

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2003-01-29 07:22 AM


Beautiful and wistful. Loved the whole piece, especially the ending.

The wind will still blow I know
While grass will continue to grow green
And future moons shall sing their tunes the same
The only difference my love
Is I, will not be there...to listen

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
3 posted 2003-01-29 08:30 AM


pretty sweet
Nan
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4 posted 2003-01-29 08:47 AM


This is a wonderful piece, DH... You're giving us some superb poetic offerings to savor...
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