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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2003-01-29 12:05 PM


I had to walk away from a 16 month relationship tonight. It was hard. But I think it for the best.
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It is hard
To give up someone so dear
But when you know
It's for the best
You hope they listen
To what you say

You know it's hard
You know it hurts
But it has to be done
No matter how much
Your heart breaks
And yearns
Not to do this difficult task

The sorrow of it
Will all fade
With time

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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1 posted 2003-01-29 12:37 PM


So you're just walking away?

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2003-01-29 03:09 AM


you learn quick! Time will pass and you will be happy
Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-01-30 10:39 AM


Sometime you do have to walk away even if it hurts. Very well done!
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