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SmartChick
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0 posted 2003-01-28 10:07 PM



A Great Accomplishment
~ By Sue ~

Sometimes it helps to write about the pain that you may feel
Then there are times you can write about what is real

A broken heart may heal itself when given enough time
It may take a lot longer to get them out of your mind

In time you may be able to forgive them for their wrong
The time will come when you can show them that you are strong

It is not always easy to forgive them for what they have done
But when you have accomplished this then you have won

It is a great accomplishment just to be able to forgive
After all, it is your life you will have to live

1-28-03




© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-28 10:16 PM


YES!!  Sue this is the best ever I have read from you!
I love this sweetie and it's great to see you doing so well.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2003-01-28 10:24 PM


Nicely done, Sue
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3 posted 2003-01-29 03:11 AM


you said that right! forgiveness is so hard!
Nan
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4 posted 2003-01-29 09:37 AM


Keep it up, Sue - You're doing just fine...
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5 posted 2003-01-29 09:48 AM



On target couplets!

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6 posted 2003-01-29 11:16 AM


Sue, this is rally good...the thoughts, as well as the poem...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-01-29 06:53 PM


enjoyed
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8 posted 2003-01-29 07:58 PM


"I think she's got it...by George I think she's got it!!!" Good going Sue! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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9 posted 2003-01-29 09:30 PM


I am standing on my feet, clapping for you my friend. This is great! The poem, the content, and the woman who put it all together. ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2003-01-31 03:12 PM




(smiles) Yes, it is a huge accomplishment and I wish for everyone to find the courage and strength to do so! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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