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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-28 04:46 PM


Yours As Always, Liz

shall I be
un-lady like
within my realm
of speech
do my words
rub against your skin
where my fingertips
have no reach
is there a spark
I can create
till you
become a fire
within the things
that you read from me
can you feel
the heat of my desire
there are
such feelings in me
that I have found
can not be named
I should be
the gentler one but
this stirring I discover
can not be tamed


"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-01-28 05:49 PM


Beautiful as usual

Cold hands means a warm heart

Nan
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2 posted 2003-01-28 08:53 PM


Such resolve will as Yours will Always find its way...
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-29 03:00 AM


wow! untamed! I have never read something like this from you Helen...I'm very impressed...and would like more!
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4 posted 2003-01-29 08:31 AM


HOw did the Lord Byron receive this news?
(chuckling)

very nicely done..and I enjoyed...

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5 posted 2003-01-29 09:40 AM


I like this too.
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6 posted 2003-01-29 11:25 AM


Helen, this reminds me of some of my letters to my Love....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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