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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-01-28 12:15 PM

She caught
anticipation

by her fingertips

then felt
the burn.

Scars never heal

over want,
or anticipation.

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

1 posted 2003-01-28 12:18 PM

True words, I've seldom heard.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-28 12:26 PM

Karilea, very good.

Oh, and thanks again for the choka chain...(Hey, I spelled it right that time..HeeHee!!)

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2003-01-28 12:42 PM

The hand of her soul
Burnt by fire’s emotion
Anticipation
Is cooled by light flakes of snow
To memories softer glow

Gloom

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-01-28 01:02 PM

nice, short, powerful...

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2003-01-28 01:10 PM

'Tis difficult at best to get a firm grasp with the fingertips alone... Nicely penned, Sunshine...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-01-28 01:11 PM

Oooh..love this, I do!!
Hugs YOU!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-01-30 03:42 AM

perhaps...james

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2003-01-30 03:57 AM

I guess you have a point Sunshine girl..... they don't exactly heal but just pass away with time....good though evoking little piece.

Dr Pepper Freak
Member

since 2003-01-30

Posts 72
CA

9 posted 2003-01-30 07:20 AM

You are so right...Scars never heal over want or anticipation...But they do in their own time. Wonderful job on this one!

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

10 posted 2003-01-30 05:27 PM

Nice and tightly written, sunshine!

Core

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-01-30 05:34 PM

Gadzooks, you're amazing! I just noticed that you are nearing your 32,000 th post!

Don't stop reaching your hand out in anticipation or want. We may get burned once in awhile, but as you know dear poetess, sometimes we receive the mother load! Great little write!

Warm hugs,
Linda

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2003-01-30 07:24 PM

Wonderful insight Karilea!! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

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