Untitled Senryu (for Passions)

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2003-01-28 08:40 AM

Friends offer support
through words of caring.
Grateful is this heart.

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-01-28 08:42 AM

nice....

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-01-28 09:00 AM

Very sweet. Says so much.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-01-28 09:04 AM

We're all here for you sweetie.
This came straight from your heart.
~Caring hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-01-28 09:08 AM

Now get your talents over to the choka chain....

hugs, Mom

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2003-01-28 09:12 AM

I've been told that haiku should not have a title and I'm guessing that would be true for senyru as well, so it's fine to be untitled.

As far as the sentiment within, it's very sweet and powerfully said in this softness.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Tari Miriel
Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 69
The state of mind

6 posted 2003-01-28 09:13 AM

Beautiful~

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2003-01-28 09:15 AM

Beautiful ... and how true of those who grace these pages.

Huggles, Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-01-28 12:18 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, dearest friend, you are a wonderful friend to us all and we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) This was like a warm hug to my heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-01-28 12:22 PM

Thank you, sweet Donna, for this. We all love you...

Yeah, go back to the choka chain, like Karilea said...

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-28-2003 12:23 PM).]

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

10 posted 2003-01-28 01:16 PM

Friendship in Passions
Sustains in time of need
To all who seek it

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2003-01-28 05:18 PM

This is so true. Nicely done.
Sandra

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