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Serpentine
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Serpentine |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Serpentine Serpentine the shadows snake Raking through a sensual wake. Fixing, dancing, sparking light Lighting magic in the night. A pair of lovers blooms in rhyme Open hearts at vespers time Warm within their velvet glove Kissing kisses of in love. Oblivious the world that be Amorous reality. Living captives of the dawn Crystal droplets to be born Within this lace eternity They weave their threads of ecstasy The phantom knight and maiden fair Living in a world of care. God grant their sail upon this sea And spare them life’s reality. |
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Tari Miriel Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 69The state of mind |
This hissss is anything but daunting. There is beauty in all things, as you have proved~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, and may their spirits always dance and teach any lovers of today to dance the same! (big hugggsssssss) Knighthood fills your blood, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, Who cannot help but love the last lines of this...plus, the entire poem. Enjoyed greatly... Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
my morning dose of Sy taken..now I can face the world with a bit better disposition... enjoyed Sy... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And spare them life’s reality. A most generous prayer, got an extra?? Morning Sy. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed - Fantasy is a much happier place - Let's keep these two there where they can "live happily ever after..."...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Serpentine the shadows snake Raking through a sensual wake. Fixing, dancing, sparking light Lighting magic in the night. A pair of lovers blooms in rhyme Open hearts at vespers time Warm within their velvet glove Kissing kisses of in love. ==================================== "Serpentine" must mean rhyme divine!!  Youre so kewl....look at you teasing and easing us with your clever word play and internal rhymes. Randy has arrived...just in time for breakfast of course *ww*  Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but such the snake that weaves in sin to drown such love in mortal din... ack! Didn't even want to go there... but the devil made me do it!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Sunshine! Beautiful piece wo wake up to Sy! Way cool images here. I'll not forget the tea this ayem. Green? ~Morning hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely! It could be a poem/prayer for newlyweds. Enjoyed the consistent rhythm/rhyme, impeccably written. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Good Morning Seymour - very creative morning read - much enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tari, Thank you so much. Noah, Nice reply. Pat, Thank you dear. Cpat Hair Always nice to have you stop by. Morning Duncan Why not, Nan, Exactly, Hugs. JM, Don't give him any beer, he's had enough. And tell him he forgot his long johns again. I also gave him a kiss for you. Don't forget to remind him. WWRS Sunshine, The devil made me do it too. Hugs Nancy, Yes green thank you, Hugs. VAS, Impeccable sounds good to me. Chris, So glad you liked. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AWWWW, Mr. Seymour.... I like your picture of romance you painted this morning with your words. Reminds me of my Love, of course. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Thank you sweet. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
awwwwwwwwwwwwww..sighs Sy, I just love fairytales!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper So do I, thank you so much. |
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