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Windspirit
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since 2003-01-26
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New York, U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-01-27 11:33 PM



Please don't tell me its over
Just because lifes not always clover
Please don't tell me we're through
That I'll never again be with you
Please don't tell me its done
We'll no longer be able to have fun
Please don't end our Love
Like stars falling from the Heavens above
Please don't say you won't care
That my Heart is broken, and my soul is bare
Please don't turn your back
Because of the burden in someone else's sack
Please don't forsake what we feel
Or pretend that its not real
Please don't deny our fate
I pray you see before its too late
Please don't turn out the light
Plunging our hearts into endless night

© Copyright 2003 David Ingraham - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
1 posted 2003-01-28 06:03 AM


Windspirit, you plead so well, this one seems to have a lot to do with fate and the need in ones faith.

Enjoyed.

SIncerely
Rick
  

Windspirit
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since 2003-01-26
Posts 14
New York, U.S.A.
2 posted 2003-01-28 05:38 PM


Yes you are right Rick it is to do with faith. Having enough faith in the love you have to stick with the fight. Thank you for reading..

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