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LadySofia
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0 posted 2003-01-27 07:38 PM



Captivated Prisoners

The clear water's surface
Reflects further growth
Silver flowing strands
Slowed down in pace

A childish kind of mindset
Grown to noble ambition
Emotion’s waves receding
Understanding inlet

Whispered softly
In the words of the land
“To deepest of affection
Young love will expand!”

Romantic haze
Blinding of the eyes
Bandage of sentiment
The final days

So quilted life’s fervor
From this fragmented fabric
Fresh dreams spun
Memory’s server


All fellow prisoners
Of the splendor and travail
Bound upon this Earth
Bending near to listeners:

“Heed your inner song
To reflect upon yourself.”

© Copyright 2003 Amanda Piatt - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2003-01-27 09:05 PM


Enjoyed reading this Lady...James
LadySofia
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since 2000-05-16
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FL., USA
2 posted 2003-01-27 11:55 PM


You are such a sweetheart James. I thoroughly enjoyed reading yours today as well. Thanks for sharing. It's been so long since I've been back at Passions and I have really missed everyone here. I regret to have not been more involved as I would like.
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