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Open Poetry #24

Just to see you

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

0 posted 2003-01-27 04:03 PM

Here's another small sort of poem, anyway, tell me what you all think.

~Just to see you~
I'd give you anything,
Just to see you,
To prove my love to you,
I'd tell you anything,
Just to see you,
So please do hold true,
To all the words that I've ever told you,
So please believe that my heart is true,
Just to see you,
To hold my breathe,
To hold your hand in my own and,
Watch as the slow motion,
Of your steps hold onto every thought,
Every compassion,
I'd give it all away,
Just to see you,
Just to kiss you,
And simple,
Just to see you,
You're an Angel and no one seems to care,
And you're the last thing I wish to bare,
Within my heart,
And all I want is,
Just to see you.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-01-27 08:30 PM

Poetic Bard - I think this one deserves another go around...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-01-27 08:51 PM

Very very lovely and heart-felt words here.
Nicely done.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2003-01-27 09:09 PM

I feel these words in my heart...you've expressed emotions that I understand and feel..

believe in what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-01-27 09:20 PM

Enjoyed...James

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